Formal Letter Format in English – Structure, Types and Examples

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Summary

A formal letter is written for official, academic or business purposes — to a principal, an editor, a company or a government officer. The formal letter format in English is: sender's address, date, receiver's address, subject, salutation, body, complimentary closing and signature (name). The language is polite, clear and to the point. This page explains each part, the main types, and gives solved formal letter examples for Class 8, 9 and 10.

Formal Letter Format in English – Types & Examples

What Is a Formal Letter?

A formal letter, also called an official or business letter, follows a fixed format and a respectful tone. People write a formal letter to:

  • complain about a product, service or problem in their area
  • place an order or ask for information
  • apply for leave, a certificate or a job
  • write to the Editor of a newspaper about a public issue

Unlike an informal letter to friends and family, a formal letter avoids personal chat, slang and contractions, and always has a subject line.

Formal Letter Format at a Glance

Part

Where it goes

Example

Sender's address

Top left

25, Arera Colony, Bhopal – 462016

Date

Below the sender's address

5 October 2026

Receiver's address

Below the date

The Editor, The Times of India, Bhopal

Subject

Below the receiver's address

Subject: Poor water supply in Arera Colony

Salutation

Left

Sir / Madam / Respected Sir

Body

2–3 short paragraphs

Purpose → details → request

Complimentary closing

Left, below the body

Yours faithfully / Yours sincerely / Yours obediently

Signature and name

Below the closing

Ganesh (and class/designation if needed)

Applications to the principal start with "To, The Principal…", then the date, subject and "Respected Sir/Madam".

Types of Formal Letters

Type

Written to

Example topics

Usual closing

Letter of complaint

Company, shop, officer

Faulty product, poor service, theft in the area

Yours faithfully

Order / enquiry letter

Supplier, company

Ordering books or sports goods; asking for details

Yours faithfully

Letter to the Editor

Editor of a newspaper

Water shortage, pollution, noise, education

Yours faithfully

Application to the principal

Principal

Leave, TC, fee concession, book bank

Yours obediently

Job application

Employer

Applying for a post

Yours sincerely / Yours faithfully

Business Letters

Business letters (complaint, order, enquiry) should be short, clear and focused:

  • Use plain, simple language; avoid business jargon and unnecessary abbreviations.
  • When placing an order, give exact details — item, quantity, quality and delivery date.
  • When replying to a business letter, mention the date and reference number of the letter you are replying to.
  • In a complaint, give the bill/invoice number, date of purchase and the exact problem, then say what action you want.

Letters of Application

Letters of application are used to apply for a job, leave, certificate or concession:

  • For a job, mention where you saw the advertisement, then give your age, qualifications and experience.
  • Show interest in the post and attach references or documents if needed.
  • For school applications, state your class and section, the reason and the date or period clearly.

Letter to the Editor

A letter to the Editor raises a public issue through a newspaper:

  • Address it to "The Editor" with the newspaper's name and city.
  • Choose an issue that matters to the public, explain it with facts, and suggest solutions.
  • Stay respectful even on difficult topics, and avoid offensive language.
  • Sign with your name and address — newspapers do not publish anonymous letters.
  • End with "Yours faithfully".

How to Write a Formal Letter

1. Sender's address — Write your address at the top left. Include house number, area, city and PIN code. In exams, use the details given in the question (or "Examination Hall" if none are given).

2. Date — Write the date below your address, on the left. Write it in full, e.g. "5 October 2026".

3. Receiver's address — Below the date, write the receiver's designation, organisation and address, e.g. "The Manager, Radha Electronics, MG Road, Chennai".

4. Subject — One short line that states the purpose: "Subject: Complaint about a faulty washing machine".

5. Salutation — Use "Sir", "Madam", "Dear Sir/Madam" or, for the principal, "Respected Sir/Madam". If you know the person's name, write "Dear Mr. Sharma".

6. Body — Usually two or three short paragraphs:

  • First paragraph: introduce yourself (if needed) and state the purpose.
  • Second paragraph: give details — facts, dates, problems or items.
  • Third paragraph: say what action you expect and thank the reader.

7. Complimentary closing — "Yours faithfully" (when you write "Sir/Madam"), "Yours sincerely" (when you write "Dear Mr. Sharma"), or "Yours obediently" (school applications).

8. Signature and name — Write your name below the closing. Add your class, roll number or designation if relevant.

Formal Letter For Class 8

These formal letter samples suit Class 8 school exams.

1. Formal Letter – Application to the principal complaining about a senior student

Write an application to the principal complaining about a senior student of your school.

To

The Principal

Model Senior Secondary School

Delhi

Date: 4.07.2023

Respected Sir,

I am a student of Class VIII-A. I wish to bring to your notice the behaviour of Sohan Sharma of Class X. For the past few weeks, he has been rude to junior students, using offensive language and disturbing our classes during the break and free periods.

His behaviour is affecting our studies and creating fear among younger students. I request you to look into the matter and take suitable action so that a respectful and safe environment is maintained in the school.

Thanking You

Yours obediently

Shardul

Class- 8

2. Formal Letter – Complaint to a dealer about a washing machine

You are Keerath of 56, Lal Bahadur Nagar, Chennai. You bought a new “VIP” Washing Machine from M/s Radha Electronics, MG Road, Chennai last week. Now you find that the machine makes an unbearable noise and the motor tears delicate fabrics. Write a letter to the dealer complaining about the same and requesting him to change the machine as early as possible.

Keerath

56- Lal Bahadur Nagar

Chennai

Date: 13.10.2023

M/s.Radha Electronics

MG Road

Chennai

Subject: Complaint about a washing machine

Sir,

I purchased a "VIP" washing machine from your shop on 6 October 2023 (Invoice No. 200). It came with a two-year guarantee. Within a few days of use, the machine started making an unbearable noise, and the motor has torn several delicate clothes.

This has caused me great inconvenience and loss. I request you to replace the machine with a new one, as per the guarantee conditions, at the earliest. A copy of the invoice is enclosed for your reference.

Thanking You,

Yours faithfully,

Keerath

3. Formal Letter to the Editor about poor water supply

Write a letter to the Editor of a newspaper, complaining about the bad condition of the water supply in your locality. You are Ram Dayal living at H-9 Karol Bagh Colony, New Delhi.

H- 9

Karol Bagh Colony

New Delhi

Date: 10.01.2023

The Editor

Hindustan Times

New Delhi

Subject: Poor Water Supply in Karol Bagh Colony

Sir,

Through the columns of your esteemed newspaper, I wish to draw the attention of the authorities to the poor water supply in Karol Bagh Colony. The taps often run dry, and water comes for only two hours in the morning and one hour in the evening.

Moreover, the water is often muddy and polluted. Many residents have fallen ill, and cases of jaundice and stomach infections have been reported.

Repeated complaints to the local office have brought no improvement. I request the authorities concerned to restore a regular and clean water supply at the earliest.

Thanking You,

Yours faithfully,

Ram Dayal

4. Formal Letter Placing an Order for Sports Goods

You are Neetu, head girl of Tagore Public School, Jaipur. Write a letter to Shining Star Sports Company, Kalyan, Mumbai asking him to send more popular sports material for your games and sports department.

Tagore Public School Jaipur

5 January 2023

The Manager M/s Shining Star Sports Company Kalyan, Mumbai

Subject: Order for sports equipment

Dear Sir,

I would like to place an order for the following sports equipment for our school:

  • Footballs – 10
  • Cricket balls – 20
  • Tennis balls – 20
  • Cricket bats – 10

Please make sure that all items are of good quality and packed securely. Kindly send the goods to the above address within ten days, along with the bill. Payment will be made on delivery.

Yours faithfully,

Neetu

Head Girl

5. Formal Letter – Application to the principal for a relief camp

Write an application to the principal requesting permission to organise a relief camp in school for flood victims.

To,

The Principal

Lotus Public School

Delhi

12 November 2023

Subject: Request for opening a relief camp.

Sir,

As you know, many families in nearby villages have been badly affected by the recent floods. The students of our class wish to help them by collecting clothes, dry food, medicines and money in school.

We request your permission to organise a relief camp in the school hall next week. We assure you that the camp will be run in an orderly way under the guidance of our class teacher, and all collections will be handed over to the district relief office.

Yours Truly

Shivika

Formal Letter for Class 9

1. Formal Letter – Application for a Transfer Certificate

You are Amit Gupta studying in Govt. HSS Rewa. Write an application to your principal to issue a Transfer Certificate as your father has been transferred to Shivpuri.

To,

The Principal

Govt. HSS Rewa School

Madhya Pradesh   

Date: 13.11.2023

Subject: Issuance of Transfer Certificate

Dear Sir,

I am Amita Jain, a student in Class IX-B at your esteemed school. I respectfully request the issuance of my Transfer Certificate as my father has received a job transfer to Shivpuri, and our family will be relocating there. During my time at this prestigious institution, I have cherished my 9 years of education and experiences. The knowledge and values I have gained here will always stay with me.

I kindly request that you expedite the process of issuing my Transfer Certificate. It is crucial for my timely admission to my new school in Shivpuri. I have enclosed all the necessary documents needed for the issuance of the Transfer Certificate. I would be grateful for your prompt assistance in this matter, ensuring a smooth transition to my new school. 

Thanking You

Yours Truly

Amita Gupta

2. Formal Letter – Application for books from the book bank

You are Nishita studying at Govt Girls’ Higher Secondary School, Morena. Write an application to your principal requesting him to issue books from the book bank.

To,

The Principal

Govt Girls’ Higher Secondary School

Morena (M.P.)

Date: 08.10.2023

Subject: Request for issuing books from book bank.

Dear Madam

I am Nishi, currently enrolled in Class IX. I am writing this letter to request the allocation of books from the book bank to aid me in my academic endeavors. Unfortunately, I am facing financial constraints that make it challenging for me to procure all the required study materials. I am aware that the book bank has the necessary books I require for my studies.

I would be immensely thankful if you could facilitate the issuance of these books at your earliest convenience. I assure you that I will handle them with great care and return them in excellent condition once my studies are completed. Your support in providing these books would greatly assist me in my educational journey.

Thanking You

Yours obediently

Nishita

3. Formal Letter – Application for fee concession

You are Amrita Sharma studying at Govt Girls’ Higher Secondary School, Sagar. Write an application to your principal requesting a fee concession.

To,

The Principal                        
Sagar Govt Girls’ Higher Secondary School  

Date: 14.10.2023

Dear Sir,

I am Amrita Sharma, currently enrolled in Class IX-A at your esteemed institution, and I am composing this letter to humbly request a concession in my school fees. I take my studies seriously and have maintained a strong academic record. Unfortunately, my family is currently facing financial constraints, making it challenging for us to manage the full school fees. Despite these circumstances, I am determined to pursue my education and fulfill my academic potential.

I kindly request that you consider my situation and provide me with a fee concession. Your support in this matter would greatly assist my family and me during these challenging times. Thank you for considering my request, and I hope to continue my education at our school.

Thanking You

Yours Obediently

Amrita Sharma

4. Formal Letter – Complaint to the Superintendent of Police

You are Ganesh of 25, Arera Colony, Bhopal. Write a letter to the Superintendent of Police complaining about incidents of theft and chain-snatching in your area.

Ganesh

25, Arera Colony

Bhopal, 462003

Date: 12.08.2023

The Superintendent of Police

Bhopal (M.P.)

Subject- Complaint about the theft and chain snatching in Arera Colony.

Sir,

I am writing to draw your attention to the increasing number of theft and chain-snatching incidents in our neighborhood. Despite multiple complaints made to the local police station, we have yet to see any significant action taken to address these issues. This has left the residents of our area living in constant fear and insecurity.

I kindly request that you take immediate measures to enhance patrolling and deploy additional police personnel in our neighborhood to deter these crimes. The safety and well-being of the residents should be a top priority, and we hope to see a swift response to this pressing issue. Your intervention is crucial in restoring a sense of security in our community. 

Thanking You

Yours Faithfully

Suresh Jain

5. Formal Letter to the Editor about loudspeakers during exams

You are Ganesh of E-4, Arera Colony, Bhopal. Write a letter to the Editor of a local newspaper about the nuisance of loudspeakers during exams.

Ganesh

E- 4 Arera Colony

Bhopal ( M.P)

Date: 22.10.2023

The Editor

Times of India

Subject: Nuisance caused by loudspeakers during exams

Sir,

I am writing to share my concern about the use of loudspeakers during exams in our community. As a student, I find it incredibly distracting and stressful to have loudspeakers playing loudly in the background when I am trying to concentrate on my studies.

I kindly request that the authorities explore alternative ways of communication during exam periods. This change would significantly enhance the exam experience for students like me, allowing us to perform at our best without unnecessary distractions. 

Thanking You

Yours Faithfully

Ganesh

Formal Letter for Class 10

In Class 10, the formal letter asked most often is a letter to the Editor. Each sample below follows the question's word limit.

1. Formal Letter to the Editor – switch to solar energy

Read the advertisement for solar products below. Write a letter to the Editor of an English daily, urging people to switch to solar energy to save electricity and reduce bills. Write in about 120 words.

Solar Power Systems for a Greener India — Excellent Offers: Solar Cookers, Solar Lanterns, Solar Heating/Cooking Systems, Solar Water Heaters. Raj Solar Sales and Service.

147, Panchsheel Nagar Bhopal (M.P.)

11 April 2023

The Editor The Times of India Bhopal

Subject: Need to switch to solar energy

Sir,

Through your esteemed newspaper, I wish to urge people to make greater use of solar energy. Our growing demand for electricity is putting pressure on power plants and adding to pollution.

Solar products such as cookers, lanterns, water heaters and heating systems are now easily available in the market at reasonable prices. They are non-polluting and, over time, greatly reduce electricity bills.

I appeal to readers to switch to solar energy wherever possible. The government and dealers can also help by offering subsidies and easy instalments. Together, we can save electricity and protect our environment.

Yours faithfully

Siddharth

2. Formal Letter to the Editor – educating underprivileged children

Despite the Sarva Shiksha Abhiyan and the Right to Education Act, many children still do not go to school. Write a letter to the Editor of a newspaper expressing your views and suggesting steps to be taken. Write in about 120 words.

87-A, Saket Nagar Lucknow

25 March 2023

The Editor The Times of India Lucknow

Subject: Educating underprivileged children

Sir,

Through your newspaper, I wish to raise the issue of children who still do not go to school. The Right to Education Act guarantees free education to every child between 6 and 14 years, and the Sarva Shiksha Abhiyan supports this goal. Yet many children work in dhabas, homes and factories instead of studying.

Parents in poor communities are often unaware of these schemes. Newspapers and television can spread awareness about free education and mid-day meals. Strict action against child labour is also needed.

I request you to support this cause so that every child gets the chance to go to school.

Yours faithfully

Shubh Jain

3. Formal Letter to the Editor – problems caused by rising prices

Your grandfather often talks about how cheap things were in the past. Write a letter in 100–120 words to the Editor of a national daily describing the difficulties poor families face because of rising prices.

76, Indra Vihar

 New Delhi

15th July 2023

The Editor 

The Times of India New Delhi

Subject: Difficulties faced by the common man due to inflation.

Sir,

I wish to draw attention to the hardship caused by rising prices. The cost of food, vegetables, cooking gas, fuel and medicines has increased steadily, but the income of poor families has not.

Many families are forced to cut down on nutritious food, children's education and healthcare. Daily-wage workers find it hard to meet even basic needs, and many elderly people on fixed pensions are also struggling.

I request the government to control prices of essential goods, strengthen the public distribution system and act against hoarding. Relief for the poor must be a priority.

Thanking You

Yours Sincerely

Shubhangi Gupta

4. Formal Letter to the Editor – our growing dependence on technology

Everyone, from a small child to an old person, seems to depend on gadgets like mobile phones and laptops. This is also hurting social relationships. Write a letter in 100–120 words to the Editor of a national daily expressing your views.

136, New Jamti Nagar Gwalior (M.P.)

27 May 2023

The Editor Hindustan Times New Delhi

Subject: Growing dependence on gadgets

Sir,

Through your newspaper, I wish to express my concern about our growing dependence on gadgets. Children, adults and even elderly people spend hours on mobile phones, tablets and laptops.

Technology has made life easier, but its overuse is harming our health and relationships. Families sit together yet hardly talk, children play fewer outdoor games, and many people suffer from poor sleep and eye strain. Some even feel anxious when they are away from their phones.

I urge parents and schools to set screen-time limits and encourage outdoor activities and real conversations. Technology should serve us, not control us.

Yours faithfully

Shubhman Singh

5. Formal Letter to the Editor – unclean water at a water park

You visited the water park in your city on a school trip and found the water dirty and smelly, which could cause water-borne diseases. Write a letter in about 120 words to the Editor of a local newspaper describing your experience and suggesting precautions. You are Neeta/Nitin of 420, Janakpuri, New Delhi.

420, Janakpuri

New Delhi

15th July 2023

Subject: The ailing state of the water park.

Sir,

I recently visited our city's water park on a school trip and was shocked to see its condition. The water in the pools was murky and gave off a stale smell.

Such water can spread diseases like diarrhoea, typhoid and skin and eye infections, especially among children who often swallow water while swimming.

I request the authorities to clean and chlorinate the pools regularly, change the water at fixed intervals and test its quality. Visitors should be asked to shower before entering the pools. Until then, the park should not be open to the public.

Thanking You

Yours Faithfully

Srisha Jain

Common Mistakes in a Formal Letter

  • Missing the subject line or the receiver's address.
  • Using contractions ("don't", "I'm") or casual words ("Hi", "Thanks a lot").
  • Mismatching the salutation and closing ("Dear Mr. Sharma" with "Yours faithfully").
  • Writing the date in a short, unclear form (05/10) instead of "5 October 2026".
  • Going far beyond the word limit in exams.

Frequently Asked Questions

What is the correct format of a formal letter in English?

Sender's address → date → receiver's address → subject → salutation → body → complimentary closing → name. Applications to the principal start with "To, The Principal…". The tone should be polite and professional throughout.

How many paragraphs should the body of a formal letter have?

Usually two or three short paragraphs: the first states the purpose, the second gives details, and the last says what action you expect. In exams, follow the word limit given in the question.

What is the difference between "Yours faithfully" and "Yours sincerely"?

Use "Yours faithfully" when you begin with "Sir" or "Dear Sir/Madam" and do not know the person's name. Use "Yours sincerely" when you address the person by name, e.g. "Dear Mr. Sharma". For school applications to the principal, "Yours obediently" is commonly used.

What is the difference between a formal and an informal letter?

A formal letter is written to an official, company or editor in professional language, with a subject line and the receiver's address. An informal letter is written to friends or family in a friendly tone, without a subject line or receiver's address. eSaral's Informal Letter page shows that format with samples.

What should I write in the subject line of a formal letter?

One short line that states the purpose, beginning with "Subject:". For example: "Subject: Complaint about a faulty washing machine". Keep it specific and under about ten words.

What are the most common mistakes students make in a formal letter?

Missing the subject line or receiver's address, using contractions or casual words, mismatching the salutation and closing, and writing far beyond the word limit. Checking these four points before you finish removes most errors.

Can I use bullet points in a formal letter?

Yes, when you need to list items — for example, in an order letter. Keep the opening and closing paragraphs in full sentences.

How can I practise writing a letter to the Editor?

Pick a public issue, note three or four facts and one or two solutions, then write in the format above. eSaral's essays such as Essay on Pollution and Essay on Child Labour give ready points you can use in a letter to the Editor.

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